ILTS SUMMARY MONTH:ORIGINS OF WRITING
How important writing and speaking in this era ,by since along time ago the ancient society sthrived to find out something for be able to communicate each other.At the finally,they did it.
Three ancient culture civilizations on writing and speaking are there, Ancient Summarians,Ancient Chinese,Ancient Maya.
The Ancient Summarians,they developed it around 3000 B.C. And they use it onto clay of tablet
The Ancient Chinese,in Chinese mythology ,the creation of writing is attributed to ancient sage and they began painting on cavewalls 25,000 years ago.
The Ancient Maya, it is famous for the writing they inscribed on tempe walls and other religious structures.The zapotec culture is a part of mayan civilization.In beside of that,the zapotec culture centered on Oaxaca,Mexico, was already writing around 400 B.C.Recent discoveries show that the Mayans have begun writing around 2,300 years ago.
In ancient time ,only specialized people such as scholars,priest orgovernment official used writing.Today,close to three quarters of the world'adult population can read and write.
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I have several suggestions for you
first using "one another" is to everybody, but using "each other" for each individualsecond a lot of mistake words
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Hi there,
I appriciate your effort in making your essay, however, I think you must concern more in some parts of your sentences. They're unclear. So, you must use the appropriate words in composing your writing.
For example:
Three ancient culture civilizations on writing and speaking are ...
The cultural ancient civilizations on writing and speaking are there, they are Ancient Summarians, Ancient Chinese, and Ancient Maya
