Many people argue that it is normal when we look for the help by borrowing money from their friends to overcome the difficulties.
Many argue that borrowing money from friends to overcome difficulties is normal when looking for help.
They oppose that the only thing they need to do is trying to refund that money to their friends as soon as possible.
Supporters of this claim state that returning borrowed money when possible is acceptable.
I belive that it borrowing money is harmful to the friendships when borrowing money from friends for numerous reasons.
I think you could work on using more third person. It kinda feels wishy washy if you don't assert your claim.