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Today, there are a lot of kitchen utensils available in the market, which people can buy. Quick food


mumtazdinar 12 / 15 12  
Mar 18, 2015   #1
Nowadays, food becomes easier to prepare. Has this changed improved the way people live?

Yes or No

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More attention should be paid on how instant food can change people's lifestyle. Many a person thinks that it is easy to prepare a meal at the present time. While it is true to some extent as many inventions are found to help people accomplish cooking activities such as rice cooker and microwave which can make their lives more relaxed, other people argue that eating fast food is more likely to be harmful because people do not know about the food nutrition especially when they eat meals in restaurant and fast-food outlets. However, I totally believe that this improvement affects the way of people's lives.

Today, there are a lot of kitchen utensils available in the market, which people can buy. This helps people to prepare food instantly. Firstly, rice can be cooked with the rice cooker in 15 minutes compared to a conventional cooker which usually takes half an hour. Preparing rice with this advanced technology makes people much more comfortable because they do not need to do manual check even if the rice is well done. Secondly, microwave can be used to maintain the food warm so as that this cooked food can be consumed more than twice. Unless this way works effectively, then people will not have free time, such as reading books and watching television.

Apart from these tangible benefits, it is believed that instant food is a key factor of chronic illness since this is consumed too much. A 2012 Oxford University pointed out that 85% of people in Singapore, who consume meal in food shop regularly like Mc Donald and Pizza Hut, face a health problem such as obesity, cancer, and diabetes. It happened because never do people concern about the fast food nutrition. It is widely recognised that the instant food can be harmed to the humankind.

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that although sophisticated devices can make people's lives much more uncomplicated, preparing natural food is much better because people can control the nutrition so as to make them healthier. It is imperative that people should take into consideration on their high-quality food as this affects people's body conditions.

SHanafi 120 / 415 93  
Mar 18, 2015   #2
Hi, Zuhairan

Nowadays, food becomes easier to prepare. Has this changed improved the way people live?

Yes or No

I am afraid that your answer little bit nowhere from the topic. If I were you. I would aligned the focus of the prompt before breaking it to the writings.

Your prompt is focus on is the easier of food preparation improved the way people live ? Yes or no ?.
If yes why and if no why ?
Looking back to your intro

More attention should be paid on how instant food can change people's lifestyle. Many a person thinks that it is easy to prepare a meal at the present time. While it is true to some extent as many inventions are found to help people accomplish cooking activities such as rice cooker and microwave which can make their lives more relaxed, other people argue that eating fast food is more likely to be harmful because people do not know about the food nutrition especially when they eat meals in restaurant and fast-food outlets. However, I totally believe that this improvement affects the way of people's lives.

So what kind of live improvement occuring on people's life, this is what you should focus on your futher pararaph.
Some probable ideas that I am keen on to suggest you are providing below

1. The more quicker food is served, the more providing time to work effectively. You can add a case of urban worker who live on hectic schedules in a traffic city that is very helped by this kind of technology.

2. Early mothers is helped by its technology as they have plenty of time to care their baby.


Then in the next paragraph you can add some contra opinions about no life improvement on people caused by the easier meal preparation such as :

1. People are tend to consume instant food rather than prepare healthier food for its daily diet.
2. Skill of cooking could be degenerated over time due to its developing technology.


I think, just need a little alteration to amend the coherence related to the task responses.
Beside those suggestions, I enjoy reading this work. Hopefully this helps.


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