Hi, Zuhairan
Nowadays, food becomes easier to prepare. Has this changed improved the way people live?
Yes or No
I am afraid that your answer little bit nowhere from the topic. If I were you. I would aligned the focus of the prompt before breaking it to the writings.
Your prompt is focus on
is the easier of food preparation improved the way people live ? Yes or no ?.If yes why and if no why ?
Looking back to your intro
More attention should be paid on how instant food can change people's lifestyle. Many a person thinks that it is easy to prepare a meal at the present time. While it is true to some extent as many inventions are found to help people accomplish cooking activities such as rice cooker and microwave which can make their lives more relaxed, other people argue that eating fast food is more likely to be harmful because people do not know about the food nutrition especially when they eat meals in restaurant and fast-food outlets. However, I totally believe that this improvement affects the way of people's lives.
So what kind of live improvement occuring on people's life, this is what you should focus on your futher pararaph.
Some probable ideas that I am keen on to suggest you are providing below
1. The more quicker food is served, the more providing time to work effectively. You can add a case of urban worker who live on hectic schedules in a traffic city that is very helped by this kind of technology.
2. Early mothers is helped by its technology as they have plenty of time to care their baby.Then in the next paragraph you can add some contra opinions about no life improvement on people caused by the easier meal preparation such as :
1. People are tend to consume instant food rather than prepare healthier food for its daily diet.
2. Skill of cooking could be degenerated over time due to its developing technology.I think, just need a little alteration to amend the coherence related to the task responses.
Beside those suggestions, I enjoy reading this work. Hopefully this helps.