I love the different facets of Taipei

I love the various feature in Taipei. I can simultaneously stay in a high technology, modern, fast-pace city and a city filled with art spirit and cozy atmosphere. When I want to feel the trend of the world, I'd go outside and observe the people in this city. When I want to slow my pace in this big city, I'd go to the fine art museum to take a deep breath and let myself be in those art paintings.

I love the scenery I see in Taipei. Though it is not the typical magnificent scenery such as full of high mountains or clean rivers. I just love the way that Taipei integrate the modern buildings and the beautiful nature. More important, the famous high building in the world, Taipei 101 is also in this city.

I think your topic should be "I love the different facts of Taipei"and not "facets"

You have written a good essay but there are a few grammar mistakes.



... This is an important sentence because you are telling the reader what Taipei is like.
Taipei is a modern, fast paced city with cozy atmosphere. It's place where one could find the latest technologies and is a great place to have fun.


More importantly, the world famous Taipei 101 building, which is the building in the world, is also within the city.

I like what you have done but it's not enough for an essay. Try to make it bigger. :)

Hi Pahan,
It's not what he wrote, but we do edit the topics that are too short to sound more unique and catchy... This was our idea :D

aszxxccv talks of different features of Taipei and I guess your suggestion is more appropriate. Good call :D

Thanks!

And I'm sorry I did not know that facet actually meant aspect. And now it makes much more sense to me. I am really sorry about that. :)

But I hope you found my other suggestions useful..

Hope to see more essays from you aszxxccv...