Have you ever thought about getting married?
And have children and a good career and marring your high school friend.You could talk about how marriage is regarded as a memorable and special event by most cultures (or society). Then continue by introducing your main idea that marriage isn't all what it's made out to be
Usually, you want to end your paper with a question but I don't think there's anything wrong with opening with one. I like it! But, you continue asking even after you wrote the " ? ".
TheyMany don't see beyond their wedding party. Believe me this is true with some people. And you what those people they don't stay together for long time .eventually they end up by divorce.As a result many marriages will end in divorce because people don't understand how much effort it takes to make it work. Divorce is the final termination of unhappy marriage.You don't need to say this.
You use the word "they" but do not tell your reader who "they" is. It's just a word too specific to start a sentence with. Usually you do not want to use "I", "me" or "you" statements, also known as opinion statements, unless the assignment says it's okay. Instead, expand on the idea that most don't realize marriage takes a lot of commitment and effort. As a result many marriages end in divorce.
The main causes of divorce are financial problems , cheating, and
misunderstanding of how important you areRe-write this.
There isn't a clear transition from these ideas to the topic of divorce in Erithea.
To begin with,In Eritrea, financial problems isare the main causes of divorce in Eritrea . Many families face financial issues because the womanwomen take care of children at home, and the man is the only one who works. TheyMarried couples will argue about money.
Explain why married couples in Eritrea argue about money.
Finally, she of not working.
This is an incomplete sentence.