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The main feature of the wind turbine are light-weighted-yet-tough blades


azmi23 17 / 28 3  
Sep 5, 2016   #1
Hi! I need your feedback regarding my practice on writing task 1. All critics and suggestions are very welcome!

Q: The diagrams show the design for a wind turbine and its locations.

The image presents specifications and effective locations of a wind turbine to produce electric current. It can be seen that a command centre is required for controlling a wheel sensor, whereas constructing turbine on highland will give a best result on electricity production.

The main feature of wind turbine is light-weighted-yet-tough blades which are supported by wind sensor and generator. All of these components are controlled by computer system in the command house. A steel pole prop the construction to receive power effectively.

The construction can be set everywhere including seashore and high-lying area as long as no disturbance of another landscape features. The higher it is built, the more megawatts will be produced as a consequence of air pressure that spin the blades intensively. The aforementioned system reveals that wind turbine could effectively run 100 kilowatts for domestic purpose, while 1.5 megawatts could be produced by fully constructed turbine for wider range purposes.





Ilmi_03 47 / 69 11  
Sep 5, 2016   #2
Azmi, it is a nice thread :)

The image presents specifications and effectiveideal/suitable locations of a wind ...
... on highland will give athe best result on electricity production.

... in the command house. Besides that, A steel pole prop the ...

... as long as no disturbance of anotherother landscape features.


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