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The majors are important to support the ability of student when they look a job. Forced subjects.


Wiwik Mujahidin 21 / 3 1  
Apr 10, 2016   #1
Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


The majors are important to support the ability of student when they look a job. Some people argue that young people have to choose the majors who they like, whilst many argue that student have to take the major which make they easy to look for occupation in the future such as medicine and engineering of technology, I strongly believe that young generation have to undertake the lesson what they interest to make they more achievement of their life.

The great number of people say that student have to learn the majors which is easy to get the opportunity on occupation. This is because, many graduate are difficult to find occupations, and people need a good life to increase their prestige in society. For instance, the major of the doctor, according to the data wikipedia, almost graduate of doctor directly work when they finished their study. It means people who take subjects in university are useful in society such doctor make people are easy to get well-paid job and prestige. People who take the majors who are needed by the majority of people make they easy to get opportunity to work.

However, I believe that student have to take the course what they like. It can improve their skill and their ability and they can be passionate with what they learn. For example, artist, they paint an outstanding drawings with their emotion and willing. They create an art painting that are beautiful picture who make people proud. Young generation who choose the lecturere whatever they like can make their be better in their job in the future and make they capable with their work. People who learn according their interes it can make they more qualify and have the good ability.

To sump up, although the major such health open large opportunities to get job, I more likely believe that young generation have to take the lecturer who they like to enhance their ability to do the best in their occupation. Where possible, parents have to stand with their children whatever they do.

Masfufah 10 / 12  
Apr 10, 2016   #2
Hi Wiwik Mujahidin
Let me check your essay

The majorsspecific discipline majorare is important to supportimprove the ability of student when they look for a job.
... such as medicine and engineering of technology, (end mark (.) not comma )

Here my correction for your introduction because introduction will guide you in your body paragraph.
Anaguna 21 / 27 5  
Apr 10, 2016   #3
Hi wiwik, I just give you an example to make your sentences clearer.

It means people who take subjects in university are useful in society ...

"It means taking a medical course in the university is very useful since it makes people easy to get well-paid job and prestige. They can have many probabilities in working, in part of this because profession like a doctor is needed to devote their time grappling in some hospitals. "


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