So they are unable to communication with their families and friends.
But, we have to consider the other things while
we watching the television.
For example, one of my friends has television and has connected a local dish antenna in their television.
She has been watching soccer match in game channel.
But she didn't realize her daughter's crying sound
Abruptly, her daughter fell down on the steps while trying to come to her mother.
Something like that is too much.You need to revise before uploading and pay more attention to your grammar.
Notice: If you need feedback for you essay, pls start with your own new thread ,it will be more appreciated.And do not present your essay in others' thread any more, pls kindly read the IMPORTANT sentence below especially the one in red.
You should write your theme sentence in the first paragraph itself...thats the rule we all follow in argumentative essays.
-moreover as a matter of fact, I am also an engineering student and i see that most of the times student just criticize teachers or comment to have fun and kill time in the class.
- A good teacher can always allow students to clear their doubts to a reaonable extent and if it requires lot of time, students can ask them after class.
I hope it helps.