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How to make work-life balance work by Nigel Marsh


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Sep 27, 2016   #1
Nigel Marsh lays out about day balance between work, personal time and productivity. People sometimes forget quality time with family ever their self because they spent more time in labor. People need realistic they cannot spare time of working we need find the meaning of life Marsh as He said. People need balance in life. Marsh suggest to focus on draw or map life to be knowing reality. When persons spend time to workplace for example take child in childcare, work in office which is more responsible and care full. Those activities waste people time then forget meaning of their life. As He mentioned before, Marsh say people need be meaningful so people need to set up of life with sleep well, social intimacy, physical and spiritual need. These are totally work to increase meaning of life. As result, small investment essentially transform person's quality relationship and quality in life. Nigel Marsh believe that it is possible.

RAY93 35 / 186 136  
Sep 27, 2016   #2
Nigel Marsh lays out [explained/highlighted/pointed out/came up with an idea about/described/spoke, etc. use past tense since it just a video recording that you watched, not a live broadcasting ] about day balance day between work, personal time and productivity.

People sometimes forget aboutcreating quality time with their family ever their self because they have spent more time inas labor.

People[repetitive]need realistic they cannot spare ... =they need to be realistic that they should not completely allocate their time on working and then find the true meaning of life indeed, he said.

People need balance in life.= a balance in life is a pivotal thing.

Marsh suggestED to focus on drawING or mapING life to be knowingconsciousofabout reality.

When persons spend time to workplace for example ...confusing sentence, please concern about the sense and function of your sentence in regard to what information that you want to deliver

Those activities waste people [...] believe that it is possible.

it is evident that you should revise your summary. please bear in mind and pay attention on my suggestions, corrections, or alternative sentences so that you will not make the same mistakes next time. good luck


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