Every school is an educational system that involves both learning and teaching activities. I
A little too obvious, here! This is not an interesting way to start the essay. Start the essay with a sentence that is surprising, intriguing.
In terms of teaching and learning efficiency, I a
ssert the idea that
students should feel free to ask their instructors
about everything in the classroom, because this is one of the most effective
ways for students to absorb knowledge and for teaching to deliver the content of lessons.Comma, not semi-colon:
For example, if a student's question is so complicated that it perplexes the teacher, the teacher will probably modify ...
In conclusion, a successful interaction between students and teachers requires
the efforts from both.
the two .
For
students , making efforts...
I'm not a native speaker so sorry for my poor language..
Your English is excellent!! Even native speakers make a few mistakes. You have a great style! And you asked about the structure; I think the structure of this is excellent -- good thesis statement, good paragraph topic sentences.
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