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Management of Planning - Arthur Anderson (Enron case)

champion510 1 / -  
Mar 28, 2009   #1
it's mess rightnow.
I've to write on management of Planning and company that I've picked is Arthur Anderson (Enron case)
there is whole bunch of research materials in it rightnow but only first and 2nd paragraph is written well.

Could you guys please share your thoughts/feedback and help out?

Since there is no place to attach here. I'm not sure where to post up.

jerry 17 / 10  
Mar 29, 2009   #2
you do not need to attach anything, just post it directly.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
Mar 29, 2009   #3
Arthur Anderson is a great choice!

Well... just like strategic planning in a company, writing an essay needs strategic planning. It is okay if you start with a jumble of information, but make sure ou know where each piece of info came from so you can easily cite sources later. Take that jumble, and look at the main points that are made.

Attach topic sentences (main points) to the beginnings of paragraphs.

Rearrange the paragraphs into a good order.

When the essay is almost finished, write an introduction paragraph.

When you have written a brilliant final draft, add a conclusion paragraph to the end.

Let's see that material, paste it into your next post! Good luck, and thanks for participating.
EF_Sean 6 / 3,491  
Mar 29, 2009   #4
If you have already done the research, you are halfway there already. Try to find connections between the pieces of information you have assembled to find some overall point you can make, something that could be debated, but that you believe to be true based on the facts as you know them. That will be your thesis statement. Once you have that, organizing your information should become much easier.

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