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Manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods


nurannisaputry92 36 / 27 2  
Mar 27, 2016   #1
Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. While others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, industry and supermarkets are dominant factors of contributing a large number of plastic wastes. Some people assume that both of them are responsible to diminish amount of goods packaging while other thinks that it is better for purchaser to buy goods without using a great deal of packaging. This essay will discuss both of perspectives by considering some reasons before stating my own opinion.

In this era, manufactures and supermarkets are the biggest commercial companies that donate a lot of plastic waste. This is because the plastic cannot be degraded or recycled by technology, so it will damage the environment. For example, according to United Nations, industry and manufactures in Las Vegas create a problem for environmental issue. Flooding which occurred is caused by lots of plastic waste hampering the flow of water. More than 1.000 houses and residential area has been destroyed by flood with resulting water clogged by plastic. It is impressive that, many commercial should concern to decrease of using a packaging in order to reduce the effect on environment such as flood.

Furthermore, the manufactures is not only to be responsible for packaging effects, but also buyer should concern to decline the damage of environment by reusing plastic bag. For instance, Netherland authority are already applying over regulation for bringing a paper bag before shopping, this regulation encourage inhabitant to use their bag package to wrap their material. As a result, based on Environmental organization, the amount of plastic wastes drop sharply year-by-year from 1.1 million ton to 0.35 ton per months.

On balance, manufactures have bigger contribution to produce a lot of plastic which harm for environmental such as flood, so they should be more response to cope with this problem. I personally believe that society also have responsible for this issue to deal with manufactures to tackle this issue. I would recommend that government should develop a regulation.
angga93 42 / 74 20  
Mar 27, 2016   #2
Hello nisa, for one-idea paragraph, you have to write conclusion in the end of it. It will help the reader to extract the idea and get a clear conclusion. For example, here is my suggestion to conclude your second body paragraph.

All in all, consumers also have responsibility to reduce the use of plastic bags because they can reduce plastic waste significantly if they avoid to use it.


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