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MAP - The alteration in Brandenburg for over 20-year period started in 1990 and ending in 2010


nda18 46 / 81 9  
Nov 21, 2016   #1
The maps below show changes that took place in Brandenburg in over a 20-year period from 1990 to 2010.

The map illustrates the alterations that have occurred in Brandenburg for over 20-year period started in 1990 and ending in 2010. Overall, it can be seen that many green fields were converted to several infrastructures.

To begin with, there are some changes in residential area in western side of the river. Almost all of the green fields in the south-west of the river replaced by supermarket and two block of flats. Between them the new road had been built. Moving to the north-west side of the river, block of flats had been built nearby the lake.

There were also a significant alterations in eastern part of the town where the airport had been built in the outer city behind the school. Turning to the south-west of the town, a large factory had been built behind a new railway which was constructed along the coast and continuing to cross the west side of the river. In addition to this, a ferry port was developed in eastern coastline.




NinaJoesuf25 36 / 66 4  
Nov 21, 2016   #2
Hi Nurul,
let me help you to fix this

... period started in 1990 and ending in 2010(just mention one among the years) .

Surprisingly, almost all of the green fields ...
Between them(is it clearly about "them" ?? I think you should mention it) the new road ...


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