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IELTS: The map of Pellington city; new hypermart, near Hampford town.


ernhy 17 / 28  
Apr 13, 2014   #1
The map shows drawing of Pellington town. The government of this area plans a new hypermart. This hypermart will be placed in three choice areas.

The first possible location is in the central of city. This location is very busy because there are industrial and residential areas where near traffic free zone and park. However, only train can only allow this located because there is only railway.

The second possible area is totally different with the first one. This location is too far from center city. This location does not have population because there is no people live in there. It is really similar with the third possible area.

In conclusion, the first possible area is more recommended because it is the city central and this location near from Hampford town.




dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Apr 13, 2014   #2
You should have posted the prompt of this task for us to have a better idea about what it expects from you. Without seeing the prompt or the question, it is difficult for us to provide you with more meaningful feedbacks.

The map shows drawing of Pellington town. The government of this area plans a new hypermart. This hypermart will be placed in three choice areas.

The map presents the lay out of Pellington town and the identified three potential locations for building a new hypemart for Pellington.


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