At the moment I'm not sure if I fully understand the the phrase 'moderate instace'.
I meant "moderate stance" which means you can both agree and disagree to certain extent. That's why I asked you to have your first body para to support for the statement and the second one to write against it. If you take a moderate stance on this statement, this is how you express your opinion;
In my view, media can have both positive and negative impacts on the lives of people.How about my two paras?
The first point to know about the mass media as for instance watching TV, affects peoples cultures and any sort of way of living that they might practice and adopt another way that is different to their nature.
You tend to write lengthy sentences. Try shorter and simple ones. Have one sentence for one idea.
First, mass media can have a great impact on peoples' lifestyles and culture. For example, young girls living in a very conservative culture can be promoted to wear short dresses by watching their favorite TV shows.Always have the reason first and then support it with an example.