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Mathematics is the essence of numbers!! This is a debate where I have shared my view.


schoolboy124 3 / 5 1  
Nov 23, 2015   #1
This is a debate where I have shared my view. Please help me to improve them.

"Mathematics is a challenging subject, but of little practical use".Discuss
Mathematics is the essence of numbers.It is a subject dealing with numbers and their operations.It is a universal language created by the human itself and is capable of demonstrating many miracles.Students who seem are influenced innately seem to achieve easiness in mathematics . Students often find tough to deal with mathematics.Mostly,the girls refer it as a male dominant subject.And actually,it is.

Mathematics is a language entirely different from the language like English or Latin that are used to express ones feelings.Rather it is factual and it possesses its own beauty.The supreme beauty of accuracy and results.

Scholars hardly find Mathematics as easy and simple subject to rely .They don't prefer Mathematics for their further studies and try to trace the fact that Mathematics has no practical implications.But the thing it totally wrong.

Actually,everything that exists is Mathematics. Ranging from the carrying capacities of the earth to the height of the Everest or the depth of the Mariana Trench to to the hotness of Kalahari,everything is Mathematics.Mathematics is the base of Science.Internet, robots, network protocols everything were the outcome of Mathematics. In fact, the estimation we do is mathematics.So we can judge ourselves. And now, isn't mathematics implied practically?

Mathematics is used in every fraction of our daily life.From buying vegetables from the vendors to compound money in the banks,mathematics is implied everywhere.Economics,Business or accounts,mathematics is the crucial part of every financial fields.Mathematics is the tool for designing and engineering.Mathematics is the key to modify the nature and its contents innocuously. Mathematics helps to survey,analyse data and formulate plans.While building a bridge or a tunnel or paying service charge in cafes,mathematics is in fact implied everywhere.

Mathematics is challenging though,the students who are capable of understanding the power of numbers can turn out their relations with this subject very very well.Ignoring mathematics is much like ignoring oneself

because the universe implies maths,the society implies maths,the science implies maths and we human aren't an exception.

shuto 4 / 7 2  
Nov 23, 2015   #2
There are a few sentences that I couldn't understand, but for overall I think it's not bad. I've got what you want to say. I like how you explain the beauty of math. I think you use the word "imply" too much. Some can be replaced by "apply" or some other words. Try to write precisely and use various vocabularies. Good job! I fixed obvious errors only.

It is a universal language created by the human beingsitselfthemselves and is capable of demonstratingcan demonstrate many miracles.

Students who seem are influenced innately seem to achieve easiness in mathematics . (I can't really understand this sentence.)
Students often find it tough to deal with mathematics.
Mostly,the girls referregard it as a male dominant subject.And actually,it is.

Mathematics is a language entirely different from the spoken languages like English or Latin that are used to express one' s feelings.Rather it is factual(?) and it possesses its own beauty.T: t he supreme beauty of accuracy and results.

Scholars hardly find Mathematics as easy and simple subject to rely on .

But the thing itthat is totally wrong.

Actually,everything that exists is Mathematics. R, r anging from the carrying capacities of the earth to the height of the Everest or to the depth of the Mariana Trench orto to the hotness of Kalahari,everything is Mathematics .Mathematics is the base of Science.Internet, robots, network protocols.eE verything werewas the outcome of Mathematics.

So we can judge ourselves.(ourselves?)

Mathematics is challenging though,the students who are capable of understanding the power of numbers can turn out their relations with this subject very very well. (wordy and it's hard for readers to understand.)


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