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How media affects the lives of famous people?


vaishali1980 26 / 83  
Jul 2, 2010   #1
I agree with given statement that television, newspaper, magazines and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figure and celebrities.

Nowadays people like to read and watch news for knowledge and entertainment. There are many reason that I believes media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people.

The main reason, whenever I switch on...

OP vaishali1980 26 / 83  
Jul 3, 2010   #2
Susan

I have one question

can I write this ?
"In conclusion, media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people. Government has responsibility to make some rule to control on them"

should I have drop this sentences? If yes then why?
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
Jul 4, 2010   #3
"In conclusion, the media pays too much attention to the personal lives of famous people. The government has a responsibility to make some rule to regulate them."--- This would work.

Media is a plural noun, but in common usage it can be "the media" as a singular noun.
OP vaishali1980 26 / 83  
Jul 4, 2010   #4
thanks Kelvin for helpful suggestion.


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