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IELTS - Mobile Phone and its benefits


zubiboy008 1 / -  
Dec 18, 2012   #1
In today's world mobile phone has lot of use, it can be used for work-like situations and also for non-work situations, for instance if you have to call your friend who is thousands of miles away from you, you can reach him in a second and find his situation in minutes. It can also be used in emergency situation, when you have no way out cell phone is the best rescuer you have at that time. In this generation it is the need of every person, it can also be utilized for the internet so you have the best package on the go.

Jennyflower81 - / 690 96  
Dec 18, 2012   #2
In today's world mobile phone has lot of use, it can be used for work-like situations and also for non-work situations, for instance if you have to call your friend who is thousands of miles away from you, you can reach him in a second and find his situation in minutes.

This sentence is too long. I can help you. You may want to say it like this:
Mobile phones are very useful, and they are used by societies all over the world. Some people use them for work, and some use them for everyday things. In an instant, a person can contat a friend who lives thousands of miles away.

It can also be used in emergency situation, when you have no way out cell phone is the best rescuer you have at that time. In this generation it is the need of every person, it can also be utilized for the internet so you have the best package on the go.

Another way you can say this: In case of an emergency, access to a mobile phone is important because a person can call for help. People of all ages need mobile phones. A person can also use their phone to get access to the internet on the go.
Rachel0790 - / 1  
May 25, 2014   #3
Research paper about mobile phone impact on people's life

I am thinking to write a reacher paper about how is the cell phone impact people's life. I agree with cell phone have a lot of disadvantages, but I can not live without having cell phone in my real life. I decided to write more benefit about cell phone, and less disadvantages. I lost direction,I do not know how to organization my reacher paper. can you give me some advice about how to write my reacher paper?
ieltswriter 3 / 6  
May 26, 2014   #4
i think you should read some samples about different topics available on internet. after you get familiar with these essays you can get an idea how to organize your viewpoints.


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