Modern age has introduced many changes in almost all walks of life
"walks of life" generally refers to profession, occupation or social class. It hardly describes one's demography such as age, gender etc. So, this sentence sounds a bit out of topic.
This has also altered the choices that the children use to have in food than the earlier generation.
This has also altered children's food preferences that greatly differ the choices of older generations.Second
ly , the lifestyle children have adopted in the modern
timedays has its own
type of drawbacks.
Spending a great deal of time
in playing computer games and surfing internet
is the mostare very common
behavioral patterns of children today.