You cannot use uncited information in a task 2 essay. Do not get used to using this incorrect writing format. Restate the topic in general terms.
we are living in high-tech century
This is a part of your defense statement. Use this as a part of your reasoning topic after your extent response.
creative of chefs
LR error. The correct phrase is "creativeness of chefs" Please note:
creative - originative; productive
creativeness- having the quality or power of creating
Refer to word meaning clarity in this instance.
they adulterate the meat ...
This is incorrect reasoning. Vegetarians do not eat meat of any sort. You just contradicted your own opinion, creating a confusing opinion.
In reality, your discussion is confusing. You state one reason in the first paragraph, then discuss howmeat is mixed inthe a vegetarian diet. Needless to say, it is difficult to understand the point of your presentation. You are incoherent. Perhaps you are translating from your mother tongue to English, which caused the confusion.