Money is one of the greatest tools in life. We can buy convinience, freedom, and comfortabla life. However, If I had a million dollars, I would prioritize my personal needs and interest. I would also share and help the needs. If ever I had a million, I would definitely use the money properly.
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First and foremost, If I had a million, I would help my parents. I would pay their credit cards, and pay off our house and car. Secondly, I will put my sister back in school; She wants to be an archetic someday but because of lack of money she decided to work. She actually working two jobs. She's working at the store as a sales clerk and the other one is a Data Entry at Pharmacutical. I feel bad because she's paying half of my tuition. I think it's about time to pay back what she've done to me. Since my dad has been wanting to have a brand new car, I would buy him a red BMW. I want to give the best for my family.
If I had a milllion dollars, I would help my grandparents in my country. I would build a small business for them. Maybe a mini groceries store. In that case, I can also help my cousins that didn't work. They graduated from a good college school, but they couldn't find any because of the economy. When we were back in the Philippines, they were giving us some money and foods when we don't have.
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