Regardless, the reasons someone may choose to become a vegetarian, and the lengths someone may go to to follow vegetarianism, I feel, are personal, since consuming meat is not morally wrong.
This sentence is too complicated with all those commas! :-) I think it's always better to make a sentence that resounds like a bell. I still am not sure what this sentence means... let me think about it... um, the lengths they go to are personal... I don't really know what that means! You are a complex thinker, I think, but others are not, so write with decisive thrusts of a spear:
Regardless, the reasons someone may choose to become a vegetarian, and the lengths someone may go to to follow vegetarianism, I feel, are personal, since consuming meat is not morally wrong. Replace with a sentence that says what you really mean... I think you might be trying to express 2 thoughts at once.
And what do you mean it is not immoral?! I have eaten plenty of meat in my life, so I am not hypocriticizing anyone (made that word up), but it seems pretty clear that eating other animals is immoral for a human. Holy moly, it is like something out of a Tim Burton film.
As humans, we often misinterpret ourselves as seperate from nature because of our intelligence, but we should be doing just the opposite, and acknowledging ourselves as a part of nature more because we have the intelligence to do so. Moreover, this misconception leads us to believe we are above or apart from eating other animals, which is so relevant to nature.-----This is starting to be a good argument. It is natural for animals to eat animals.
But then some would argue that humanity gets to decide how it wants to be. Dogs sniff each others butts, so I guess that is natural, but I am not going to sniff anyone's butt. :-)
Yeah, so your problem is that you try to express more than one thought at once. Do not be in a hurry to express everything. Make it very simple for the reader.
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...and that animals production is being done in a wrong enough manner to become a vegetarian---Do you mean that is it being doing so much damage that we might need to become vegetarians in order to make up for it?
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