I would really appreciate if you could read my Letter. I am preparing for IELTS (GT), and would request you to please read from letter from all perspective; including Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Grammar, etc
IELTS (Task-1): You have recently moved to a difference house, write a letter to an engligh friend. In your letter,
- Explain why you have moved?
- Describe the new house
- Invite your friend to come and visit
I hope this letter find you and your family well. I am writing to let you know that we have shifted to a new house located near to the city center.
Actually, my previous house was quite far from my office location and; as you know that I don't have a conveyance, so daily morning I had to walk 01 hour to reach at my office and it took almost same time to home in evening. Sometimes, I had to stay late in office and by the time I reach home my family would already asleep.
In addition, the house was quite old so I had to spend much amount of money for its repair that becomes unnecessary pain on my pocket. Due to these reasons, I decided to look for another house and luckily I found one located a few steps away from my office.
Let me tell you more about my new house, first of all, it is a newly built house and fully furnished so no maintenance pain, it has got a new swimming pool, beautiful garden and a gym for exercise. Second of all, it is located a few steps away from my office which is such a relief for me.
It has been a while we haven't seen each other and my family is also anxious to meet yours. So, I would like to invite you over the weekend to have dinner with us, where I can show you my new house.
We look forward to see you this weekend. Don't forget to bring your dog, my child loves it.