Ellen Sandor formed (art)n group which produces------ what is this? a typo?
i'm not sure if i am allowed to post the website links here so i didn't.
You can if necessary! Just do not post content that is not original.
:-)
Links are okay, though...
As John Wyver, 1989 says moving images have delighted and fascinated people all over the world for many centuries.
If this is a direct quote, put it in " " marks. If it is not a direct quote, you really do not need to cite someone for a statement so obvious. So... maybe you should start by saying that moving images have delighted people for centuries, but then give a direct quote by Wyver to support your claim.
You write well, but the first paragraph ends in a weak way. ----> Virtual Photography is the area where the moving image technique has been used which gives a feel of emotional movement. Advertising is another area where the technique is used in its conventional manner which is producing short clips or videos. --- do not end the first para of an essay with a sentence that tells, "XXXX is another..." This part of the essay, at the end of the first para, is where you make it clear to the reader what your main point is.
Writing is art, so it does not always have to be this way, but in this case I think it will help a lot to have a strong thesis statement there at the end of the first para.