Multinational companies and globalization have increasingly appeared in many countries.
It bring many good thing for everyoneIt is believed that all people can profit by positive aspects of globalization . In my opinion, I support the appearance of them throughout the world(What do you mean? mention your opinion clearly. .
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Multinational companies and globalization
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It can create new jobs
---> It can increase the job opportunities ...
for the people and therefore,
to improves the quality of live to local community
Unemployed young people can get a job and improve their living
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Before ,Looking back at the past reveals that the economies of many countries were dependent on local business people werewith less chance of employment , but after the introduction of multinational companies their economy boosted up and become those oflied among top economy in the worldwealthy nations .
Another benefits of open trade and market expansion of multinational companies create competition among local and foreign brand and develop the market . In addition that people would acquire more benefits in term of quality product.
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