it will be my pleasure if you can teach me how to avoid Chinglish.
I don't think Chinglish is something to avoid. People from different parts of America and Europe speak very different kinds of English. Everyone has their own way. You have a great style already.
Thanks, Duminda, for the great edit here!
Here is another one I found:
Although modern technology
make makes it possible, I still believe some museums and art galleries will not disappear.---I agree!
In conclusion, I admit that modern technology has provided a more convenient and comfortable
manner way for people to watch exhibitions, but museums and art galleries are necessary
to and should be preserved for
its their importance in education and culture.
Great job!!
I came to this thread because I saw advice you gave in another thread: "Go to unanswered often, especially Shrek Fiona."