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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited



Emmachou1792 1 / -  
Nov 28, 2024   #1
Nowadays , many museums and historical buildings are primarily visited by tourist and not local people. This trend has both benefits and drawbacks.
Firstly, historical buildings and museums are always top choices so tourists usually choose to come here on their tour. Secondly, tourists like to come places they have never visited. For examples, I really want to visit historical places in Ho Chi Minh City, because I live in Hanoi and the advertising for that place is very attractive.
On the other hand, local people do not visit these places often. I think these places may be too familiar to them. Therefore, these places have become tourist areas and it no longer belongs to them.
In conclusion, in my opinion, tourist should have good sense and respect for local people's places. And local people should advertise historical buildings because it contributes to their economic growth.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15415  
Nov 28, 2024   #2
The response is too short and will receive word count deductions. You are not even close to the 250 minum word requirement. You are not going to pass the task 2 test. The reasons for the failing score will be based on missing word number and, based on the TA requirements, an unclear writer's opinion and under developed discussion presentation. Basically, your writing skills will be considered insufficient when considering your written response. You only have a working draft presented here. This will not be considered a complete response during the actual test. That is because each paragraph is lacking in explanation, substance, and proper examples. You need to write at least 275 words if you want to have your writing skills properly scored and assessed.


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