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Me and Myself; Need help with Grammar!


farhanwsd 1 / -  
Oct 25, 2013   #1
Hi,
My name is Farhaan.
I live in U.A.E.
I am from pakistan.
I study in winchester school odmetha in year 6.
My favourite subject is english,ict,art and geography.
I am 10 year's old.
I will turn 11 this December.
My favourite country is U.A.E.
I wil be a world begest racer.
My favourite car is nissan patrol.
I like to modify cars.

P.S.: I am new on this website. If you have any suggestions kindly post them below-..

Thankyou for your time..

something 23 / 52 5  
Oct 25, 2013   #2
I wil be a world begest racer.

I will be the world biggest racer.

:)
dumi 1 / 6,930 1592  
Oct 26, 2013   #3
Okkkk.... what is the purpose of this writing. Have you been asked to write on the topic "Myself"?
I don't find major grammar issues with what you have written although there can be more effective grammar style that you could have adopted. It's pretty good grammar wise :D

However, if this is an essay you need to arrange the flow. Let your ideas flow in a more logical sequence .
hongphuc 2 / 2  
Nov 3, 2013   #4
My favourite subject is english,ict,art and geography.
I am 10 year's old.I like to modify cars.

My favourite subjects are English, Ict, Art, and Geography.
I am 10 years old.
I am keen on modifying cars.

I hope that it can help you.
;)


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