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Nanotechnology brings an immense important role


NinaJoesuf25 36 / 66 4  
Dec 1, 2016   #1
Needless to say, nanotechnology brings an enormous important role in this present time. Astonishingly, this carries a huge implication in terms of field engineering. Thanks to this advancement technology, the crucial breakthrough contributes in transportation' issue since this tiny unbreakable form helps the engineers to build a novel spacecraft become the strongest one. It is followed in computer industry to create new generation of the novel innovation related to the size. In any case, it will also give revolutionary innovation in electric power.

Dioba 68 / 104 7  
Dec 1, 2016   #2
Hi Nina, there are several minor mistakes in your summary.

1.nanotechnology brings an enormous important role in this present time---> double adjectives
2. ... implication in terms of field engineering.engineering field
3.it will also gives revolutionary innovation ...

Keep writing and break a leg!
nurainiyusuf16 47 / 83 6  
Dec 2, 2016   #3
Hello Nina!
Allow me to give you suggestions :)

breakthrough contributes in transportation' ...

Collocation:
Contributes to

It is followed in computer industry ...

Collocation:
Followed by

Hope it helps you :)
vickynurhakim98 - / 5  
Dec 2, 2016   #4
Hello Nina
I have got some comment for your summary..

thisThese carries a huge implication ...

Thank a lot..


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