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About Nelson Mandela - One material of SAT I prepared


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Oct 13, 2011   #1
Nelson Mandela

Nelson Mandela, the first black people president of Africa, had sturggled for black people since 1944 and arrested in proson for about 27 years. He joined the Africa National Congress in 1944 and after 1948 he was concentrate to fight against the ruling National Party's apartheid, then he became national nolunteer-in-chief of the 1952 Defiance Campaign. But nevertheless even the life became so harsh, he always have his words "the struggle is my life." Finally as we all know, this hero won hunderds of awards over four decades. So in this sense, we could find that he always follows his heart and definatly insisted his mind and that brings the black people rights and equality.

EF_Susan - / 2,365 12  
Oct 13, 2011   #2
Nelson Mandela, the first black people president of Africa, had struggled for black people since 1944 and was arrested and thrown into prison for about 27 years.

He joined the Africa National Congress in 1944, and after 1948 he was concentrated on fighting against the ruling National Party's apartheid, before becoming the national nolunteer-in-chief of the 1952 Defiance Campaign.

But nevertheless his life became so harsh that he always saidhis words "the struggle is my life."

Finally as we all know, this hero won hunderds of awards over four decades. So in this sense, we could find that he always follows his heart and definitely insisted his mind and that brought the black people rights and equality.

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