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My new neighbor is a restaurant


gbekil 7 / 17 2  
Oct 11, 2014   #1
It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan?Why?Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

I have been working a university as a research asistant, and completing my doctorate, therefore I usually go home late, and there is no time to prepare food. There are several benefits for why I prefer being neighboor with a restaurant.

The first benefits I always come back to my home late, inasmuch as not only because I worked as an asistant of enginnering departmant, but also because I have to attend the courses of doctorate. After arriving at home , I don't have any energy to perepare some food. Hence, a restaurant, which is built in my neighborhood, can make my life more convenient.

The second benefits sometimes you can get some guests who will visit you surprisingly. At this time, probably you don't have any things to serve them if you work really hard.For instance, my mother-in-law told me that she was at bus to visit us; I got really surprised , since I have nothings in my refrigerator. But, if there was a restaurant near the home , I would order to it whatever she liked.

The third benefits of being neighbor with a restaurant is getting some different meal which is hard to cook at home since I am not good at cooking. Fish, for example, my husband and I really like to eat, but we can't cook it well, moreover we both work hard, there is no time to go a restaurant which is far to our home, so being built a nearer restaurant gives a chance to us eating whatever we like eventhough we can cook it.

To conclude, a new restaurant, which may be built in my neighboorhood , will make my live easier, because it has provided me good meals when I get tired from work, and have a surprising guest, or I want to eat food which I cannot cook well. This kinds of facilities as a restaurant makes the life of people ,whom have no time to prepare food to themselves and their guest, more convinent.

Katy Curie 5 / 7 7  
Oct 11, 2014   #2
I have been working a university as a research asistantassistant , and completing my doctorate. Therefore I usually go home late, and have no time to prepare foodthere is no time to prepare food . There are several benefits for why I prefer being neighbor with a restaurant.

Firstly, The first benefits I always come back to my home late, inasmuch as because of not only my assistant work, but also my PhD courses I worked as an assistant of enginnering departmant, but also because I have to attend the courses of doctorate. After arriving at home , I don't have any energy to prepareperepare any some food. Hence, a restaurant, which is built in my neighborhood, can make my life more convenient.

Secondly, sometimes I have guests who visit me surprisingly . The second benefits sometimes you can get some guests who will visit you surprisingly. In this case, I can not treat them well because of my work load. At this time, probably you don't have any things to serve them if you work really hard. For instance, my mother-in-law once told me that she was at bus to visit us. I got really surprised , since I have nothings in my refrigerator. However, But, if there was a restaurant near the home , I would order to it whatever she liked.

The third benefits of being neighbor with a restaurant is getting some different meal which is hard to cook at home since I am not good at cooking. Fish, as an example/ for example, is the dish my husband and I really like to eat, but we can't cook it well, moreover we both work hard, hence there is no time to go a restaurant which is far to our home. That a restaurant is going to be built nearby built a nearer restaurant will give us a chance to eat whatever we like even though we can cook it.(I don't think this is necessary)

To conclude, a new restaurant, which may be built in my neighboorhood , will make my live easier, because it would provide has provided(you use present perfect for what started in the past and still happens at the moment) me with good meals when I get tired from work, when I have a suprising guest, or when I want to eat dishes which I can not cook well. and have a surprising guest, or I want to eat food which I cannot cook well. This kinds of facilities as a restaurant makes the life of people ,whom have no time to prepare food to themselves and their guest, more convinient.
Vns9x 102 / 236 16  
Oct 11, 2014   #3
Do not talk about yourself that much attempt to write it in general way. In other words, jot down something more about how people around the restaurant can suffer from it.
vangiespen - / 4,137 1449  
Oct 12, 2014   #4
Gbekil, you need to address 2 stands in this particular essay aside from your own in order to effectively discuss the pros and cons of having a restaurant open in your neighborhood. Consider discussing the positive and negative effects of having a restaurant in the neighborhood. The positive side include convenience, job opportunities for the members of the community, and increased income for the city. The negative side is sanitation problems due to the trash volume the restaurant will produce, the smell of the food coming from the kitchen that will mix with the air of the neighborhood, and the dietary considerations of the residents in the area. After you have discussed those two sides, you can then present your own opinion on the matter as you have described above.

By presenting two other sides to the situation, you will have effectively balanced the discussion to show the concerns of the community and the concerns of an individual who will be affected by the opening of the restaurant. Consider all of the factors in your own decision making process and go with the side that you feel best fits your own reasons for supporting or not supporting the restaurant. That will create a solid basis for your own opinion.

Don't forget to follows the rules for writing a proper conclusion. I noticed it was missing in your draft essay. You know that your essay will be deemed incomplete without a solid conclusion to close it :-)


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