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A new study reveals that happy people have a great sense to cheer their spouse up


dils 20 / 33 2  
Oct 31, 2016   #1
Happy People Make Their Spouses Healthier

Happiness related to physical well being. The individuals who are happier usually also healthier and less physical problem. At the moment individuals fell good, they tend to be more active. Related with this, a new study reveals that the happy people have a great sense to cheer their spouse up. The people whose spouses are happier have predominant factor to have better in shape. Data confirm that people with a happy spouse are 34% more likely to be healthy.

There are several reasons why a happy person has the possibility to improve their partner's health. Firstly, it is because a happy partner has a number of positive energy to take care the significant others. Secondly, happiness correlates with better diet, routine exercise, and a good quality of sleep, it also leads the individuals stay away from self-destructive behavior. Thirdly, of course the happy people will make their partner's life easier by enjoying all the activities that they have.

beauty60 4 / 2  
Oct 31, 2016   #2
Here is my opinion:

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justivy03 - / 2,366 607  
Oct 31, 2016   #3
Hi Dila, here's another one from my end;

- Happiness is related to the physical
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- healthier and with less physical problem.
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- Related withIn relation to this,
- a new study reveals that the happy people have a great
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- individualsto stay away

There you have it Dila, I hope the above remarks are helpful to your revision and as always, be careful in choosing the words that you incorporate in your sentences as this will have an impact in the overall outcome in the essay.


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