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new technology school buildings wouldn't be needed in the future



start208 14 / 68  
Apr 21, 2011   #1
hi everyone; this is an introduction I want to share here. Please correct me and tell how to write an atractive introduction. THANKS

Nowadays, thanks to new technology,the students can sit at their house and take lessons, sit for exams and get diplomates from choosen schools. The internet enables students to enrole in different schools that creat their own websites to let the students meet teachers and benefit from lessons and exercises. Teachers give auditory and visual lessons on lines to better understanding. In the near future, I think there would be no need for school building and traditional way of teaching is going to be baned.

Scientiana 12 / 42  
Apr 22, 2011   #2
Note: I think "thanks" is not so formal. "Due" is a better word.
OP start208 14 / 68  
Apr 22, 2011   #3
thanks Annika for helping me.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Apr 23, 2011   #4
Hello Ismail and Annika, great work here.

I'll add something that you may not know... the word Internet is a proper noun, so it is supposed to be capitalized!

Also, this is the way to use the FUTURE VERB TENSE:
In the near future, I think there will be no need for school building and the traditional way of teaching.


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