Media is themost powerful source in providing any information.
There are two types of media such as electronic media and (???) . The electronic media includeTVs, radios, computersTV, radio, etc and print media; magazines, newspapers etc.
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What are those two types.... you need to specify.
News editors have right to decide what to broadcast on TV and what to print on newspaper but they can't use their power in an efficient way due to many reasons, some are below:
... I think it's better if you introduce the news editors because they suddenly appear in your essay without having any link to your previous sentence which speaks about media. I mean you need to set up a better link.
Firstly, social and political bodies are a big constrain in providing true and original news.
First, the freedom of providing genuine information and news to the public is seriously constrained by the interests of social and political groups.news editor areis forced
It's good to have the topic so that we can align our comments with that. Is this for IELTS or TOEFL?