Nigel Marsh shared his point of view on how to balance between life and work

Ted Summary - Nigel Marsh - How to make work life balance work

Nigel Marsh shared his point of view on how to balance between life and work. At first, he talked about his desperation towards his jobless status, until he got new job to work for. From that time, he learnt about how to properly manage the life as well as work by solving the problem.

To solve the problem, there are 4 tips to be considered: acknowledging the reality of society which means to know the fact about our surroundings, takes the full responsibility towards your own problem as the government and company will not help us, never put your life in commercial cooperation as we are the one who decide to put boundaries of our life, and careful to adjust our time frame to do our activities so that it can be organize well. In addition, he said that approach the balance in balance way, for instance, the organization of time between work and life need balance and not higher than the other.

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- ... towards his jobless status,(putting a comma here is not necessary) until he got a new job to work for.
- ...taking the full responsibility towards (...) company will not help us, never putting your life in commercial (...), and careful toadjusting our time frame to (...) it can be organized well. (Parallel sentence)

- ...he said that approach the balance in balance way,(looks quite confusing)

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