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El Nino affects climate in countries on both sides of the Pacific Ocean


broibra 17 / 19 3  
Nov 30, 2015   #1
The diagrams illustrate a comparison of El Nino conditions and normal pacific ocean conditions which affects climate in countries on both sides of the pacific ocean. Overall, it can be seen that the changes are in the wind strength that brings the conditions known as El Nińo.

To begin, the normal conditions in the first place, it shows on the first diagram wind from the east is stronger than wind from the west. Consequently, storm clouds have moved to west change the weather conditions to rain. Following this, warm water moves in the same direction as the wind, while cold water rises from the deep on the eastern side, which results in the increased number of fish near Peru due to more nutritious environment.

Move to El Nińo conditions, the situation has changed dramatically to strong wind now blows from the west side. That makes storm clouds and warm water move in the same direction as the wind. Both of these factors affect weather that there is the risk of drought in Australia, while in Peru, in contrast, it gets rainy. Another fact to mention is that the number of fish is going down in the coastal waters of Peru.




vangiespen - / 4,137 1449  
Dec 3, 2015   #2
Ibrahim, watch out for the capitalization of words in your essay. Always remember to capitalize the first letter of proper nounrs. Exmaples of this will follow below along with other corrections:

The diagrams illustrate a comparison of THE El Nino conditions and normal p Pacific o Ocean conditions which THAT affects THE climate in countries on both sides of the p Pacific ocean . Overall, it can be seen that the THE MOST NOTICEABLE changes are in the wind strength that brings the WHICH CREATE THE WEATHER conditions known as El Nińo.

To begin, t The normal conditions in the first place, itshows on SHOWN IN the first diagram DEPICTS wind COMING from the east is AS BEING stronger than THE wind from the west. Consequently, s Storm clouds have moved to THE west , change CHANGING the weather conditions to rain. Following this, warm water moves in the same direction as the wind, while cold water rises from the deep on the eastern side, which results RESULTING in the increased number of fish near Peru , due to more nutritious environment.

Move MOVING to El Nińo conditions, the situation has changed dramatically to strong wind now blows BLOWING from the west side. That THIS makes CREATES storm clouds and PUSHES warm water TO move in the same direction as the wind. Both of these factors affect weather that there is WHICH CREATES the risk of drought in Australia, . w While in Peru, in contrast, it gets rainy. Another fact to mention is that RAINS COME AND the number of fish is going down GROWS in the coastal waters of Peru.


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