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The number of female and male teachers working in different forms of education setting in UK in 2010


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Jun 7, 2021   #1

report from the bar chart



The bar chart compares the number of female and male teachers working in different forms of education setting in UK in 2010.
Overall, the fluctuation between the proportion of teachers being woman an men is obvious. While male teachers hold a major percentage in university, female ones have a particularly significant presence of teaching in nursery and primary school.

There is a big difference in gender gap. From over 90% to 95% of teachers being female and male do in nursery and under secondary school positions, whereas male teachers reach from 5 to 9 % of teachers teaching in this educational level. However, the percentage of male lecturers are two times as many as female with 60% representing in university teaching posts.

Regarding other 3 educational levels, the proportion of female and male teachers make up a slightly similarity at 50% of those in college. Both men and women hold at 45 to 55% in secondary school and private training institute.

Please score me that is motivation for me to try.



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Jun 8, 2021   #2
You need to learn how to do several things before you can actually begin to show improvement in your writing:

- Familiarize yourself with English grammar rules in relation to writing. Specifically in relation to singular V. plural word usage
- Learn what a sentence subject is, why it is important to sentence writing, how to properly place it in a sentence.
- Practice sentence drafting based on proper information presentation.

These are the preliminary basic lessons you need to learn in order to improve your writing skills. These are also the existing presentation problems in your current essay, which is why I am calling your attention to it.

different forms of education setting

Which are? Your summary overview is incomplete and lacks quick information references.

being woman an men is obvious

Serious grammar problem in relation to Singular V. Plural.
Incorrect usage of an indefinite article (an) when a conjunction (and) should be used. These errors could cause a failing GRA score.

being female and male do in nursery

I'm not sure what you mean. This will lower your C + C and GRA scores.

You should work on improving the areas I indicated above to help improve your writing skills and score. You are not within passing score range at the moment.

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