followed by each family structures
Add another sentence that enumerates the structures. Complete the short form details presentation.
married women and men
Go alphabetical. Men before women as per the English alphabet. It has nothing to do with the image positioning since this is just the trending information.
which women do without paying
Do what without pay? The sentence structure is incorrect. This sentence says women do not pay for something instead of women not being paid for work. This is the type of sentence that recieves a low C + C and G R A score.
Use the word "respectively" in these types of presentations to point out where or to whom the information applies.
All task 1 essays require a 3 paragraph presentation. This is short by 1 paragraph. Further analysis of the image is required. There should have been an individual gender analysis prior to the combined gender study.