WRITING TASK 1 : JAPANESE POPULATION FOR 50 YEARS
The bar chart and the table compare the information about the number of inhabitant in Japan during a century ; from 1950 to 2055 calculated in millions and the quantity of elderly resident aged 65 years above. Overall, it is clearly seen that the sum of Japan's population is keep increase throughout the years until 2005, while the old age people's figures will be projected rise up to 2055.
The total number of resident in Japan experience a gradually increase for fifty years, since 1950 to 2005. Its figures hit the peak of population in 2005. While, the reverse condition occured after 2005, where the quantity of Japan's inhabitant decrease slightly until 2015. Moreover, the reduction of Japan's total population will have been decreasing sharply by 2055.
Looking at aged people figures, its number experience an upward trend and will be predicted increase up to 2055. The enormous amount of elderly resident's increasing number seen from 1950 until 2005. There was an increase of about 21% at the time. However, the next increasing number of elderly only projected about 10% in each twenty years (from 2005 until 2055).
... information about the number of inhabitantinhabitants in Japan ...
1. Remember ! Inhabitants ---> for plural form, because it is countable
the quantity of elderly residentresidents aged 65 years above
2. Remember ! residents ---> for plural form, because it is countable
the sum of Japan's population is keep increasestill increase throughout the ...
3. is + keep + increase ---> triple verb
The total number of residentresidents in Japan experienceaincrease gradually for fifty years, sincefrom 1950 to 2005
4. Remember ! residents ---> for plural form, because it is countable
5. a + noun ---> a gradual not gradually (adverb).
6. Experience is not appropriate (see Cambridge dictionary examples) for this world , because it has different meaning.
7. From.... to.... . If you use since, you don't need to add since 1950 to 2005 ----> this.
Hi Ainun
Let me give correction for your writing
- It is much better if you attach the picture of your data
population is keep increase throughout the year (double verb)
Japan experienced a gradually increase for fifty years
... Japan's inhabitant decreased slightly until 2015
experienced an upward trend and ...
There was an increase of about 21% at the time.
number of elderly people only projected about 10%
NB : Mostly writing task I use past, so pay attention on it
Best Regard
Dear ainunazwaria, here some advices for your writing and feel free to correct me too!
... the table compares the information about ...
... Japan experience a gradually increase for fifty years, since 1950 to 2005 .
... resident's increasing number seen from 1950 until 2005 There was an increase of aboutat 21%.at the time.
Regards
hai, here are my opinions for your essay
First of all, you need to put the question and the chart. because of it necessary for us to check your report from picture that is given.
... information about the number of inhabitantinhabitantS in Japan during a century\
... the sum of Japan's population is keep increase throughout the years until 2005 (double verb)
While(no need comma) the reverse condition occuredoccured after 2005, where the quantity of Japan's ...
GOODLUCK
Hi! I have some feedback for you!
Please attach the image of your chart!
...it is clearly can be seen...
...experienced a gradually increase for fifty ...
should be past as the given data is in the past form.
