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One of the tremendous hurricanes, called Matthew, was going to surge Haiti


Aris05 31 / 24 1  
Oct 3, 2016   #1
Powerful Hurricane Matthew Threatens Haiti, Jamaica and Cuba

One of the tremendous hurricanes, called Matthew, was going to surge Haiti and it was on fourth grade for dangerous level. Thus, the hurricane moved at 145 mph which was expected to reach Haiti on Monday and Cuba on Tuesday. To overcome this disaster, The authorities of haiti had taken the practical anticipation. They had set more than 1,300 emergencies shelter which were able to accomodate more than 340,000 inhabitants. The recent information of matthew hurricane was broadcasted by radio as well, while the rescuers warned the society directly. After passing Jamaica and Haiti, the storm was predicted to destroy Cuba. To anticipate the number of victims, the government moved approximately 500 families to the Florida by military planes. They also established the shelter emergencies in some places.

korbansuspendcuy 8 / 18  
Oct 3, 2016   #2
good essay..
just some slight grammar errors..

it was on [the] fourth grade for[of] dangerous level

matthew hurricane was broadcasted by [the] radio as well

keep writing..


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