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'Online classes versus conventional classes' - my argumentative essay


skarlet 1 / -  
Apr 11, 2012   #1
Online classes versus conventional classes

Have you ever taken an online class? Many people are choosing online classes because of the benefits it offers. However, a traditional class still giving you a lot of opportunities that any online class will give. there are a lot of differences between an online class and a traditional class.

Online classes are a fantastic possibility for those who cannot travel to college. In addition, online classes are wonderful for people with disabilities ro diseases such as dyslexia. It's also a good option for women with children that can't spend a lot of time traveling and being in a traditional class. Even though people connecting to a computer can't know other students' ideas ro share their ideas,at least they can contact their professor and ask questions. Also they have the benefit of stopping and rewining the lecture when they do not understand something. For example, my friend Gisselle was taking an online class, and she didn't understand a concept, so she stopped the lesson, took a break and then sit down again. It was how she could get it. Online classes can be awesome, but traditional classes also have their good points.

Many colleges and universities have a campus. If for some reason the students can't travel every day to the college, they have the choice of staying on the campus for a while and not spending money on gasoline. Even though campuses are a little expensive, it's a good option for young people that do not have a lot of responsibilities with family or jobs. Furthermore, in a conventional class people cna share their thought, get ideas from other students and be actively involved in the class. In a face-to-face class students have special attention from the instructor. For instance, when I started ESLW-04 in September, the first thing I did was telling the professor my weakness in that material and that I needed special help with it. So she helped me, and I improved.

o conclude, although online classes and traditional classes have a lot of differences, they have something in common. Both of them are for peoplel that really want to study, want to have a better future and are focus on their goals. Being a good student is not easy, but it is the beginning for those who want a wonderful proffesional.

EF_Susan - / 2,365 12  
Apr 11, 2012   #2
Online classes versus conventional classes
Have you ever taken an online class?In my opinion, this question should not be your opening statement; rather the following sentence should be...

For example, my friend Gisselle was taking an online class, and she didn't understand a concept, so she stopped the lesson, took a break and then sitsat down again.

It was how she could get it.just what she needed to understand the lesson.
For instance, when I started ESLW-04 in September, the first thing I did was telling the professor...
To conclude,In conclusion,
Being a good student is not easy, but it is the beginning for those who want a rewarding professional career.

I have made a few slight corrections and revisions, but all in all, great job!! :)
study abroad - / 3  
Apr 11, 2012   #3
Hi skarlet,

I am thinking of this :

"...Even though people connecting to a computer can't know their fellow students' ideas to share theirs/ in order to share theirs.."

"...can share their thoughts .."

please , these are just suggestions , maybe you'll have better ones

best regards
missy7779 2 / 2  
Apr 11, 2012   #4
I am currently attending an online college. I am really enjoying it.


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