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A study report regarding online plagiarism had implied the fact that the act being committed may be big is actually not a devastating number. Online plagiarism is also comparable to Conventional plagiarism and that the numbers are quite near (24.5% and 27.6% respectively). It was also found that Online Plagiarism is done by ignorant students that were not taught or either does not understand the fact that online information is not public domain! This survey was able to conclude that Online plagiarism is not that much of a widespread problem of literature theft as feared to be but others disagreed with the said statement. (KELLOGG, Alex P.)
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