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Ielts: Opinion on animal experimentation; Should continue!

MisterWandering 18 / 321 130  
Jun 27, 2013   #1
Topic: Some people strongly oppose animal experimentation, believing that it causes pain to animals, while some other people consider it necessary. What is your opinion?

People hold different views towards the necessity and humane feature of current animal testing. In my opinion, both human and animals are capable of deriving enormous benefits from this sort of experimentation and thereby, it is suggested to be enhanced.

To begin with, the advantages of vivisection to human are most prominent in the field of medicine and education. For instance, various types of animals such as pigs and mice have been significantly used in testing new kinds of drugs by dint of possessing similar biological features to those of human. Some drug prototypes are theoretically effective but whether there are any side effects in reality is rather unknown. In these cases, the use of animals in checking pharmaceuticals is essential prior to applying in persons. Additionally, many animal-based researches have been conducted inside educational institutions have provided new insights into the evolution of animals. Briefly, animal testing helps to advance our medical and scientific knowledge.

Equally importantly is that, animal testing are beneficial to wildlife species for many reasons. Firstly, by carrying out genetic experiments do scientists potentially offer some solutions for the endangered species. It is true that a wide variety of animals are on the verge of extinction owing to the loss of natural habitats or increasing pollutants. With the results of animal research, this issue will probably be tackled. Furthermore, examining ethology will provide an outlet for controlling some species in particular patterns. For example, nowadays it is applicable to increase the likelihood of animal survival in natural environment. Accordingly, animal experimentation has a positive impact on animals themselves.

To sum up, animal testing plays a significant role in the well-being of both human beings and animals. Therefore, animal vivisection should continue rather than being suppressed in the future.

Please help me correct my essay! Thanks in advance!
sally12390 2 / 4 2  
Jun 28, 2013   #2
people have different views about the necessity of animal testing
i really enjoyed reading your essay
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
Jul 4, 2013   #3
First introduce your topic to the reader. What does your prompt say?;

opic: Some people strongly oppose animal experimentation?

.... so get lots of help from the prompt;
Animals are often used for experiments and some people strongly oppose this act, claiming that it can cause a great pain to animals. However, others argue that this is a necessary requirement. In my opinion, this practice outweigh its negative effects on society and environment.
OP MisterWandering 18 / 321 130  
Jul 4, 2013   #4
Thanks for your advice! When I was writing this essay, I couldn't think of any other way of paraphrasing the topic and then I just wrote a simple sentence.

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