Summary from article
Adriano Lameria, from the University of Durham, UK and his team found that orangutans are able to emulate sound from human conversation. An ape ,'Rocky' who was studied at Indianapolis Zoo in US, between April and May 2012, have produced sounds similar to words in a "conversational context".
This experiment observed for more than 120 orangutans from 15 wild and captive pupulations. The procedure of that experiment are by conducted a game where the ape attempted to copy sounds made by human in variation of tone and pitch. That was recorded for more than 12,000 hours. Then, the reaserchers compared the collected sounds. This research proved that orangutans have the potential capacity to control the action of their voices.
Journal reference: Scientific Reports, DOI: 10.1038/srep30315
Link: newscientist.com/article/2099090-orangutan-learns-to-mimic-human-conversation-for-the-first-time/
Hi Eka, here's my analysis towards your summary. I hope you can follow through.
1st paragraph:
- Adriano Lameria and his team , fromresearchers from the University of Durham in the U.K. , and his team found that orangutans are able to emulate sound from human conversation.
- An ape, 'Rocky', whowas studiedhad been studied at Indianapolis Zoo in the US between April and May 2012, . It/Hehave/has produced sounds similar to words in a "conversational context".
2nd paragraph:
- This experiment observed for more than 120 orangutans from 15 wild and captive populationspupulations.
- The procedure of that experiment are by conductedthe experiment is by conducting a game where the ape attempted to copy sounds made by human in variation ofvarious tone and pitch.
- ThatThis was recorded for more than 12,000 hours.
- Then, the reaserchersresearchers compared the collected sounds.
- ThisTherefore, it is proven by the research thatresearch proved that orangutans have the potential capacity to control the action of their voices.
As you can see, in the first sentence, the usage of appositives in your sentences were not really accurate and some grammatical issues were occurred. However, I hope the above corrections would help you composing a good summary for the next practice. Good luck :)
Adriano Lameria, from the University of Durham, UK and his team found that orangutans are able to emulate sound from human conversation.
you should write:Adriano Lameria from the University of Durham, UK, and his team found that .......
please concern about the appropriate using of punctuation for forming appositive
An ape ,'Rocky' [need comma] who was studied [or was researched] at Indianapolis Zoo in US, between April and May 2012,[no need to put in the midst of commas]have[plural/singular issue, it supposedly 'has'] produced sounds similar to words in a "conversational context".
... 120 orangutans from 15 wild and captive pupulations.spelling The procedure of that experiment are[singular/plural issue] by conducted a game where the ape ...
Then, the reaserchersspelling compared the collected sounds.
Hello ekalamarsyari11,
... more than 120 orangutans from 15 wild(wild is noun countable---> wilds) and captive pupulations(populations) . The procedure of that experiment are(is) by conducted(after preposition used conducting) a game where the ape attempted to ...
Then, the reaserchers(researchers) compared the collected sounds.
Keep writing and sharing your article summaries eka :)
Hello Eka,
Adriano Lameria, from the University of Durham, UK and his team found that ..... Adriano Lameria and his team from University of Durham, United Kingdom, found that .....
The procedure of that experiment are by conducted a game is by conducting game .... After by you have to use V ing
Spelling problems :
pupulationspopulations
reaserchers researchers
Hope it will help you.
