Since you are not being asked to verify the validity of the presented opinion, you should avoid saying things like "It is undeniable". That is a personal opinion so it shoujld be placed in the correct section of the paragraph, which is the writer's opinion. Do not place such statements in the restatement since that part needs to reflect only the provided information, based on your understanding, to the reader.
While this might be helpful to some extent, I do not think this is an efficient solution.
You are not being asked to measure the extent of the public opinion, you are to quantify your personal opinion in this case.
These are 2 serious errors that will negatively affect your preliminary task accuracy score. The mistakes in presentation and response will pose major point deductions that may lead to the failure of the essay score in the end. You have not provided the correct response format throughout the essay.