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IELTS - Should parent teach children or schools?


samenmohammad 10 / 19  
Jul 28, 2012   #1
Task:
Some people think parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss.


Parents are always are worried about the way their children brought up. So, some people think that parents should teach their children. Others but believe that schools are the main responsible of children education. In this piece of writing, I would like to present my personal views about that who are the best persons who could teach children in the best way, school teachers or parents.

Some scientists believe that parents are the only person who can teach their children to become a good member for community. They offer several reasons for this suggestion. Firstly, parents are emotionally ready to learn the significant values for their kids. Because nobody like a father or mother wants to the best things for the children. As reported in Tehran Times, 60% of children accept the education of their parents better than with their teachers. Secondly, children spend more times with their families, then they will visit many places with them. These situations can be educational.

On the other hand, good teachers are a source of experiments. They found how children can learn educational materials and moral values better. Meanwhile, many parents usually request from children's teachers to help them to solve many mental and physical problems related to their children. I myself remember one of my teachers who was more closer to me than my parents and helped me a lot in many personal problems.

Personally I think that the role of both parents and school teachers in preparing children to go to society, in the best way, is very important.
woyunsi3000 2 / 4  
Jul 28, 2012   #2
Parents are always are worried about the way their children brought up.

Parents are always worried about the way how their children are brought up.

Others but believe that schools are the main responsible of children education.

The others tend to believe that schools have the main responsibility for children education.

In this piece of writing, I would like to present my personal views about that who are the best persons who could teach children in the best way, school teachers or parents.

In this piece of writing, I would like to present my personal views about who are more suitable to teach children, school teachers or parents.

Some scientists believe that parents are the only person who can teach their children to become a good member for community.

Some scientists believe that parents are the only persons who can teach their children to become a good member for community.
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