Can we state a lie survey in order to support our idea by saying number and percentage ?
"In 2003, US recorded that about 7,7 million American children is taught practically about fair competition through school's sport team"
Hy Pedram, I did not do lie about the data. I do not know even attaching a link is permitted in this forum, but I synthesize the data based on Hilary Levey Friedman's article titled "When Did Competitive Sports Take Over American Childhood ?", in regard if you want to read :D. Actually, I am not in line in writing tricky data though I recommend to write the factual data indeed.
I didn't get your means about " main recommendation of the issue
Well, let me try to explain more
The topic says about school or parents is the best place for upbringing children to good society member. In your conclusion, I think, It is good for you to give recommendation which one is the best place in teaching how to be good member of society.
I would be most grateful if you would write conclusion for this topic too.
This is just an example for you to compare, do not too straight with my style. Every person has different way to write an essay. If you want to do more compare, please kindly read another essays from another writers too.
nice to share with you :)