The prompt restatement and writer's opinion is well developed. The thesis statements are clear to the examiner and fully support the given point of view of the writer. It is definitely going to receive a high preliminary scoring consideration. It accurately addresses the task requirements.
Discussions are also well developed although there are some incorrect word references in the presentation:
official form
There is no official form of a newspaper. It is either in print or electronic form. Both forms of news presentation as considered official and valid.
magazine
A magazine is different from a newspaper. A magazine is either a weekly or monthly publication that covers personal interest or specific topics in relation to a given focus. A newspaper gives daily updates regarding current events both local and international.
reasons
Second is an adjective that is an ordinal representative of 2. Therefore, the plural form of reason is not necessary.
tons
Refers to weight rather than number. You should be using a numerical reference in this instance.
Overall, the mistakes made in word reference did not create any problems in understanding the explanation of the writer. His opinion did not waver throughout the presentation and valid examples and reasons were provided. This is still a passing essay despite the LR problems it contains.