Participation in cultural activities in Scotland

cultural activities THAT THE SCOTTISH ARE LOVING

The table compares the participation of adult Scots in six different cultural activities from three main age groups and the data is given in percentages.

It can be seen that the most favorite activity for young adults (16-24) and older individuals (25-44) was performance including singing, dancing, playing music and acting with 35% and 22%, respectively. Meanwhile, those people aged 45 to 74 were likely to be most attracted by crafts, 22% out of the total, two times the corresponding figure in the youngest group. Moreover, the biggest difference was observed in the categories of visual arts and writing, where attendance for the 16-25 age group was nearly two to three times greater than the older ones.

On an average scale, performance and crafts reached the highest rates of participation at all ages, at 22% and 19%, by turn, while writing and computer-based activities stayed as the least common choice

Overall, the level of participation in cultural activities was relatively dependent on people's ages.

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