International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not. what are you opinions on this?
The past 20 years have seen a considerable increase of international tourism. There is a highly controversial issue whether its popular demand brings advantage trend or drawback trend. In my opinion, everything has two sides and this problem is not an exception.
On the one hand, it is an undeniable fact that global tourism has significant benefits, especially economy and culture. Indeed, tourism is a key element that could boost economy. When outside visitors, for example, travel to local areas, it will enhance such infrastructure as hotels, hospitals, roads, and facilities as well as make more money for host residents. In addition, thanks to international tourism, culture of host country is know-well. As a result, we could exchange a lot of beautiful cultures and become more closet, which helps relationship between nations to be more friendly.
On the other hand, global tourism can have a negative effect on the natural environment. Too many travelers living in fragile regions such as mountain range, desert have impacted on physical areas. Much attention has focused on erosion along major trails, but perhaps more important are the deforestation and impacts on water supplies arising from the need to provide tourists with cooked food and hot shower. Consequently, habitat of wild animal is threaten and main resources may be limited or vulnerable to degradation through heavy use.
By way of conclusion, I firmly believe that international tourism need be seen both tow aspect, therefore the government should find the right balance between beneficial tourism and its negative impact.
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